If you ask me, I think it's too sloppy and not a worthy continuation of Save our souls, which is a great piece. The composition is blunt, the balance in characteristics of the elements isn't fine-tuned, and the placing of colors doesn't add a sence of depth but makes it all even more frustrating to look at.
The only thing I like about this is the color combo, the zeppelins and the way you've painted the clouds.
Better luck next time, sorry.

I too, like the Save our souls better, but this is not bad at all. The composition works for me in depicting a busy and big city. I agree about the color depth thou, could be higher. And let's face it, he had to wash ashore sometime, couldn't stay at sea forever

agree with Mihai, plus, it is a bit sloppy
but still...you're an amazing artist, post more

Great Work!!!

+10

great work, it feels incomplete, i agree that the colours dont add a sense of depth and its definetly obvious u've spent more time on "save our souls" but as always i love your work its amazing and waay better than anything i can do =]

Oh no... What happened to the ickle albino frog?!?!

Thank you for yours critics. I wouldn't have submitted my drawing at this state. I tought it was quite finished, but right, this is sloppy.

Thank you for your honesty.

I'm loving your art more and more, this is wonderfull!

awsome i love this

I really like the colors and bridge, nice perspective on that and I like the figures and birds on top of it.
Even though I really like this some things bother me a bit, I've tried to put my finger on it...

the top part and the bottom part (from the ground where the caracter is standing on, to the bottom) have both so different colorscemes that they seem to be of a different pictures.. Also the blue window in the top right corner seems a bit out of place...

As for the composition... I really like the bridge as i've said, i'm not sure at the over-all compo. It looks a bit chaotic. The main focus is ( as I see it) on the part of sky just above the bridge, between the two lampposts. There are a lot of lines the point you in that dirction. I'm not sure if that is what you want, there isnt really much going on there.. I imagne that your caracter is your intended main focal point, but he doesn't realy draw attention this way.

Over all I like the picture. I like the color sceme and your style, I really hope this helped a bit. I'm afraid I've put it a bit chaotic

Annette

I like it the way it is... I was a big fan of the first piece but this is a very good solution to his landing. I like to think you meant it to turn out this way to contradict the calmness in the first piece so that it appeared a hectic and disoriented upon his arival into the city.

amazingly colors!!! +8/+8

I love the colors and again very expressive. You can "read" the picture